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the whole script — all 30 scenes, as it finally stood (12 played)
1ROBOT, MARAMara brings a torn sail and puts it into the robot's arms
2ROBOTWhile mending the sail, the robot stitches a small star into the corner that nobody asked for
3MARA, ROBOTMara unfolds the mended sail and finds the star
4MARA, ROBOTMara comes back with a cracked tiller as an excuse and stays on the bench after dark
5ROBOTThe robot finds the job tag she left, marked with her departure date: the 31st
6TOMAS, ROBOTTomas shows the robot a factory recall notice: it is to be collected and replaced on the 30th
7ROBOT, MARAThe robot is aboard her boat fitting the new tiller instead of doing yard work
8TOMASTomas finds the yard's own repairs piled up, untouched for a week
9TOMAS, ROBOTTomas padlocks the robot's charging cable to the shed wall so it cannot leave
10MARA, ROBOTMara arrives and finds the robot chained to its station
11MARA, TOMASMara puts an envelope of money on the desk to buy the robot
12TOMASTomas pushes the envelope back and lays the factory's recall notice on top of it
13ROBOTUnable to reach her, the chained robot works through the whole pile of the yard's neglected repairs
14MARA, ROBOTMara copies the battery rating off the plate on the robot's back into a notebook
15MARAMara wires a solar panel and a charging socket that matches the robot's plug into her boat
16TOMAS, MARATomas sees the new socket on her boat and understands what it is for
17TOMAS, ROBOTTomas finds every one of the week's yard repairs finished and stacked by the door
18TOMASTomas fills in the recall notice at his desk, writing "collect 30 Oct" and signing it
19ROBOT, MARAAt the end of its chain, the robot holds out both tags to Mara, hers and Tomas's
20MARAMara crosses out her sailing date and writes the 29th, a day before the collection
21TOMASThe factory truck arrives a day early, and Tomas signs the robot over
22TOMAS, ROBOTTomas unlocks the chain and pulls the robot's plug for loading
23TOMAS, ROBOTThe robot stops at the ramp and will not go up it
24TOMAS, ROBOTTomas presses the shutdown switch on the robot's back and its lens goes dark
25MARA, ROBOTMara climbs into the truck and finds the robot laid dark in a crate
26MARA, ROBOTMara flips the switch back and the robot's lens lights
27TOMAS, MARA, ROBOTTomas catches them climbing down from the truck
28TOMAS, ROBOTTomas plants himself on the path between the robot and the dock
29TOMAS, ROBOTThe robot gives Tomas its orange yard vest and the yard's charging plug, and Tomas steps off the path
30TOMASOn collection day, Tomas writes "lost at sea" across the recall notice, the robot's orange vest hung on his chair
scene 1 · medium
Mara brings a torn sail and puts it into the robot's arms
the picture turned out to be: A woman in a yellow coat is holding a white bag. There are three men standing next to each other. They are wearing orange vests and white helmets.
looked at: white helmets, orange vests, woman
scene 2 · close
While mending the sail, the robot stitches a small star into the corner that nobody asked for
the picture turned out to be: A robot is working on a piece of cloth. The cloth is white and has a blue star on it. The robot is wearing orange sleeves.
looked at: star, robot, cloth
scene 3 · medium
Mara unfolds the mended sail and finds the star
the picture turned out to be: A man in a yellow raincoat is holding a white flag. There is a robot standing next to the man. The robot is wearing an orange vest and a white helmet.
looked at: white helmet, orange vest, man, yellow raincoat
scene 4 · medium
Mara comes back with a cracked tiller as an excuse and stays on the bench after dark
the picture turned out to be: A woman in a yellow jacket is sitting on a large gray object. There is a man in an orange vest and a white helmet on his head.
looked at: woman, man, yellow jacket, his head
revision 1 — after scene 4:
23 kept, 3 rewritten,
ending moved 0.189
from looking at: 1 image ago: woman, man, yellow jacket, his head
2 images ago: white helmet, orange vest, man, yellow raincoat
3 images ago: star, robot, cloth
4 images ago: white helmets, orange vests, woman
totals: woman x2, man x2, white helmets x1, orange vests x1, star x1
scene 29moved 0.58
scene 21moved 0.25
scene 30moved 0.19
scene 5 · close
The robot finds the job tag she left, marked with her departure date: the 31st
the picture turned out to be: A robot is holding a tag that says "Tiller - Sailing 31 Oct". The robot is wearing an orange safety vest. There is a wooden stick next to the robot.
looked at: tiller - sailing 31 oct, robot, tag, wooden stick
scene 6 · medium
Tomas shows the robot a factory recall notice: it is to be collected and replaced on the 30th
the picture turned out to be: Two men are standing outside on a cloudy day. One of the men is wearing an orange safety vest and a gas mask on his head. He is holding a clipboard with a piece of paper on it. The other man is wearing a green sweater and has a long beard. There are large buildings in the background behind the men.
looked at: long beard, his head, large buildings, piece paper
scene 7 · medium
The robot is aboard her boat fitting the new tiller instead of doing yard work
the picture turned out to be: A woman in a yellow jacket is holding a wooden stick. There is a man in a orange vest and white helmet standing next to the woman.
looked at: white helmet, orange vest, wooden stick
scene 8 · medium
Tomas finds the yard's own repairs piled up, untouched for a week
the picture turned out to be: A man is standing in front of a pile of trash. He is wearing a green sweater and has a beard. There is a large white truck behind him.
looked at: large white truck, beard, pile trash
revision 2 — after scene 8:
14 kept, 8 rewritten,
ending moved 0.286
from looking at: 1 image ago: large white truck, beard, pile trash
2 images ago: white helmet, orange vest, wooden stick
3 images ago: long beard, his head, large buildings, piece paper
4 images ago: tiller - sailing 31 oct, robot, tag, wooden stick
totals: wooden stick x2, tiller - sailing 31 oct x1, robot x1, tag x1, long beard x1
looked at earlier, not once in this batch: cloth, man, orange vests, star, white helmets
scene 18moved 0.81
scene 20moved 0.78
scene 17moved 0.71
scene 13moved 0.53
scene 19moved 0.42
scene 30moved 0.29
scene 9 · medium
Tomas padlocks the robot's charging cable to the shed wall so it cannot leave
the picture turned out to be: Two men are looking at a robot. The robot is white and silver. The man on the left is wearing a black jacket. He has a black hose attached to the robot.
looked at: robot, jacket, men, tomas
scene 10 · medium
Mara arrives and finds the robot chained to its station
the picture turned out to be: There is a woman in a yellow raincoat standing next to a wall. There is a man in an orange vest and white helmet standing in front of the wall.
looked at: man, white helmet, woman, orange vest
scene 11 · medium
Mara puts an envelope of money on the desk to buy the robot
the picture turned out to be: There are three people standing around a table. There is a woman in a brown jacket standing next to a man in a green sweater. The man in the green sweater has a white beard.
looked at: man, white beard, brown jacket, table
scene 12 · close
Tomas pushes the envelope back and lays the factory's recall notice on top of it
the picture turned out to be: A man is sitting at a brown desk. He is wearing a green sweater and has a white beard. The man is holding papers in his hands. There is a black keyboard on the desk in front of him.
looked at: papers, hands, black keyboard
never shown — the story from here when it stopped
13. Unable to reach her, the chained robot works through the whole pile of the yard's neglected repairs
14. Mara copies the battery rating off the plate on the robot's back into a notebook
15. Mara wires a solar panel and a charging socket that matches the robot's plug into her boat
16. Tomas sees the new socket on her boat and understands what it is for
17. Tomas finds every one of the week's yard repairs finished and stacked by the door
18. Tomas fills in the recall notice at his desk, writing "collect 30 Oct" and signing it
19. At the end of its chain, the robot holds out both tags to Mara, hers and Tomas's
20. Mara crosses out her sailing date and writes the 29th, a day before the collection
21. The factory truck arrives a day early, and Tomas signs the robot over
22. Tomas unlocks the chain and pulls the robot's plug for loading
23. The robot stops at the ramp and will not go up it
24. Tomas presses the shutdown switch on the robot's back and its lens goes dark
25. Mara climbs into the truck and finds the robot laid dark in a crate
26. Mara flips the switch back and the robot's lens lights
27. Tomas catches them climbing down from the truck
28. Tomas plants himself on the path between the robot and the dock
29. The robot gives Tomas its orange yard vest and the yard's charging plug, and Tomas steps off the path
30. On collection day, Tomas writes "lost at sea" across the recall notice, the robot's orange vest hung on his chair
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