20260929-004121
22 of 30 scenes played · 5 revisions ·
0 facts
Missing home
the whole script — all 30 scenes, as it finally stood (22 played)
1The daughter carries the last moving box in, and her father sits beside his suitcase without opening it.
2The only thing he has unpacked is a brass house key on a string, and he sets it on the windowsill.
3The daughter finds his bed empty and his coat and suitcase gone.
4She finds him on a bench holding a bus ticket to his old town.
5She takes the ticket out of his hand.
6She fits a security chain high on the front door while he watches from the armchair.
7She hands him a letter from the estate agent: the farmhouse sale completes on Friday.
8He tears the letter in half.
9While she is on the phone, he puts on his jacket and picks up the suitcase.
10She stands between him and the locked front door.
11He gives up and sits down on the suitcase in the hallway.
12She sits on the floor beside him and gives him back the black-and-white photograph of the farmhouse.
13She lifts his suitcase and her own black bag into the boot of her car.
14The car is alone on the road through open fields.
15He stands at the gate of the farmhouse from the photograph, a SOLD sign beside it.
16His brass key still turns in the lock.
17Inside the emptied kitchen, he shows her the pencil height marks on the doorframe.
18He props the black-and-white photograph on the kitchen windowsill and spreads a blanket beneath it to sleep.
19She sleeps in the car outside while his window stays lit.
20The couple who stood behind the fence return with a small girl and a moving van.
21The daughter carries his rolled blanket out past the newcomers, and he stays in the doorway.
22The young father in the red shirt sets the first box down on the kitchen floor beside the old man.
23The small girl stands against the doorframe with the height marks, the old man beside her.
24He draws a new pencil line above her head.
25He writes her name beside his own daughter's old marks.
26His daughter holds out his gray jacket, the photograph taken from the windowsill tucked in its pocket.
27Wearing his jacket, he takes the brass key off its string and out of the padlock on the green door.
28He holds the key out to the small girl while his daughter waits at the car.
29The girl's hand closes around the key.
30He rides away holding only the photograph of the house, the girl on the porch behind him holding the key.
scene 1 · medium
The daughter carries the last moving box in, and her father sits beside his suitcase without opening it.
the picture turned out to be: A woman in a green coat is holding a brown box. There is a man in a gray jacket standing next to the woman. The man has a brown suitcase in front of him.
looked at: m, s, g, g
scene 2 · close
The only thing he has unpacked is a brass house key on a string, and he sets it on the windowsill.
the picture turned out to be: A person is holding a key. The key is gold in color. The person is wearing a gray sweater. There is a window behind the person. There are buildings in the distance.
looked at: k, b, s, p
scene 3 · medium
The daughter finds his bed empty and his coat and suitcase gone.
the picture turned out to be: A woman in a white dress is standing in front of a bed. There is a man in a gray shirt standing next to her. There are clothes hanging on a wall above the bed.
looked at: w, g, c
scene 4 · medium
She finds him on a bench holding a bus ticket to his old town.
the picture turned out to be: A man is sitting on a bench. He is wearing a gray jacket and has a brown bag on his lap. There is a woman standing next to him wearing a green jacket and black pants. She has a black bag on her lap.
looked at: j, b, p
revision 1 — after scene 4:
12 kept, 14 rewritten,
ending moved
from looking at: 1 image ago: j, b, p
2 images ago: w, g, c
3 images ago: k, b, s, p
4 images ago: m, s, g, g
totals: g x3, s x2, b x2, p x2, m x1
scene 26moved 0.22
scene 13moved 0.20
scene 27moved 0.09
scene 9moved 0.06
scene 5 · close
She takes the ticket out of his hand.
the picture turned out to be: There are two hands holding a white piece of paper. There is a brown handle on the bottom of the paper. The hands are wearing green jackets.
looked at: h, p, b, j
scene 6 · medium
She fits a security chain high on the front door while he watches from the armchair.
the picture turned out to be: A woman is sitting on a stool in a room. She is wearing a gray shirt and blue pants. The woman is holding a gold door handle in her hands. There is a man sitting in a chair behind the woman.
looked at: g, m, g, h
scene 7 · close
She hands him a letter from the estate agent: the farmhouse sale completes on Friday.
the picture turned out to be: There are two people sitting at a table. There are papers on top of the table. The man on the right is wearing a gray sweater. He is holding a piece of paper in his hand. There is a picture of a house on the paper. The table is gray in color.
looked at: p, h, p
scene 8 · close
He tears the letter in half.
the picture turned out to be: A picture of a house on a piece of paper. The picture is black and white. The hands of a person are holding the paper. There is a knife on the table. The table is made of wood. The person is wearing a gray sweater. There are other papers on top of the table as well.
looked at: h, h, p
revision 2 — after scene 8:
17 kept, 5 rewritten,
ending moved 0.3
from looking at: 1 image ago: h, h, p
2 images ago: p, h, p
3 images ago: g, m, g, h
4 images ago: h, p, b, j
totals: h x5, p x4, g x2, b x1, j x1
looked at earlier, not once in this batch: c, k, s, w
scene 12moved 0.53
scene 30moved 0.30
scene 10moved 0.18
scene 15moved 0.10
scene 9 · medium
While she is on the phone, he puts on his jacket and picks up the suitcase.
the picture turned out to be: Two people are standing in a room. There are suitcases in front of the people. There is a large white cabinet behind them.
looked at: p, l, r, s
scene 10 · medium
She stands between him and the locked front door.
the picture turned out to be: A man and woman are standing outside of a building. The man is holding a brown suitcase in his hand. The woman is wearing a green coat. The door to the building is brown. Part of a black trash can can be seen sitting outside of the building. A tall white building is standing in front of the door.
looked at: m, c, h, p
scene 11 · medium
He gives up and sits down on the suitcase in the hallway.
the picture turned out to be: An elderly man is sitting on a brown suitcase. He is wearing a blue jacket and black pants. A woman is standing next to him wearing a green sweater and dark pants. There is a brown door behind the woman.
looked at: g, j, p
scene 12 · medium
She sits on the floor beside him and gives him back the black-and-white photograph of the farmhouse.
the picture turned out to be: A man and woman are looking at a picture. The man is holding the picture in his hand. The picture is black and white. The woman is wearing a green sweater. There is a lamp on a table behind the couple. The lamp is turned on. There are pictures on the wall behind the lamp. The wall is painted white.
looked at: m, l, p, w
revision 3 — after scene 12:
16 kept, 2 rewritten,
ending moved
from looking at: 1 image ago: m, l, p, w
2 images ago: g, j, p
3 images ago: m, c, h, p
4 images ago: p, l, r, s
totals: p x4, l x2, m x2, r x1, s x1
looked at earlier, not once in this batch: b, k
scene 18moved 0.60
scene 26moved 0.46
scene 13 · medium
She lifts his suitcase and her own black bag into the boot of her car.
the picture turned out to be: A man and woman are standing next to a car. They are holding suitcases in their hands. The woman is wearing a green coat. There is a black bag in front of the woman.
looked at: w, m, s, c
scene 14 · wide
The car is alone on the road through open fields.
the picture turned out to be: A small blue car is parked on the side of the road. There is a large field of grass behind the car. There are many trees in the field.
looked at: m, c, s
scene 15 · medium
He stands at the gate of the farmhouse from the photograph, a SOLD sign beside it.
the picture turned out to be: A man is standing outside on a cloudy day. He is holding a newspaper in his hand. A woman and a man are standing behind a wooden fence. A large white building can be seen behind the man. Part of a red sign is hanging on a tree in front of the building.
looked at: m, w, t, h
scene 16 · close
His brass key still turns in the lock.
the picture turned out to be: A person's hand is holding a brass padlock on a green door. The person is wearing a long sleeve gray shirt. The door has a brass knob on it.
looked at: h, d
revision 4 — after scene 16:
12 kept, 2 rewritten,
ending moved
from looking at: 1 image ago: h, d
2 images ago: m, w, t, h
3 images ago: m, c, s
4 images ago: w, m, s, c
totals: m x3, w x2, s x2, c x2, h x2
looked at earlier, not once in this batch: b, g, j, k, l
scene 20moved 0.48
scene 27moved 0.42
scene 17 · medium
Inside the emptied kitchen, he shows her the pencil height marks on the doorframe.
the picture turned out to be: An older man and woman are standing outside of a building. The man is wearing a gray coat. The woman has dark brown hair and a green jacket on. The building has a large window on it. Part of a wooden door can be seen on the side of the building. A brown cabinet is sitting below the window.
looked at: p, h, c, o
scene 18 · medium
He props the black-and-white photograph on the kitchen windowsill and spreads a blanket beneath it to sleep.
the picture turned out to be: An elderly man is sitting on the floor in a room. He is wearing a gray sweater and a black tie. There is a window on the wall behind him with a black and white picture on it.
looked at: g, w, b, b
scene 19 · medium
She sleeps in the car outside while his window stays lit.
the picture turned out to be: A woman is sitting in the back seat of a car. She is wearing a green jacket and a white scarf around her neck. The woman has her eyes closed and her head is resting on the steering wheel of the car. There is a windshield wiper in front of the woman. Behind the woman is a parking lot full of cars and
looked at: p, h, w, h
scene 20 · medium
The couple who stood behind the fence return with a small girl and a moving van.
the picture turned out to be: There are people standing outside. There is a white truck parked in front of a white house. A man in a red shirt is sitting on top of a truck. A woman in a black shirt and blue jeans is standing next to a girl in a brown dress.
looked at: t, b, g, w
revision 5 — after scene 20:
8 kept, 2 rewritten,
ending moved
from looking at: 1 image ago: t, b, g, w
2 images ago: p, h, w, h
3 images ago: g, w, b, b
4 images ago: p, h, c, o
totals: h x3, w x3, b x3, p x2, g x2
looked at earlier, not once in this batch: d, j, k, l, m
scene 22moved 0.11
scene 21moved 0.03
scene 21 · medium
The daughter carries his rolled blanket out past the newcomers, and he stays in the doorway.
the picture turned out to be: There are people standing outside of a house. There is a man in a gray jacket standing next to a door. There are trees behind the house.
looked at: p, m, g, d
scene 22 · medium
The young father in the red shirt sets the first box down on the kitchen floor beside the old man.
the picture turned out to be: Two men are standing in a kitchen. One of the men is holding a cardboard box. The other man is looking down at the box. There is a counter behind the men with a lot of stuff on it.
looked at: o, m, b
never shown — the story from here when it stopped
23. The small girl stands against the doorframe with the height marks, the old man beside her.
24. He draws a new pencil line above her head.
25. He writes her name beside his own daughter's old marks.
26. His daughter holds out his gray jacket, the photograph taken from the windowsill tucked in its pocket.
27. Wearing his jacket, he takes the brass key off its string and out of the padlock on the green door.
28. He holds the key out to the small girl while his daughter waits at the car.
29. The girl's hand closes around the key.
30. He rides away holding only the photograph of the house, the girl on the porch behind him holding the key.
space play/pause · arrows step · esc — scene by scene notes