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1Ben tucks a small ring box into his suit jacket.
2Lena hides a packed suitcase under a blanket in the car boot.
3Kit opens the door and pulls Ben and Lena into the party.
4Ben shows Kit the ring, and Kit sets champagne on ice for midnight.
5Lena, alone, takes a night-train ticket from her coat pocket.
6Ada steps out and takes the ticket from Lena's hand to read it.
7Ada tells Kit, and Kit lifts the champagne back out of the ice.
8Kit persuades Ben to hand over the ring box for safekeeping.
9Kit drops the ring box into the cutlery drawer.
10Lena pulls her coat out from the pile of guests' coats on the bed.
11Ben catches Lena at the front door and lifts the coat off her shoulders.
12Ben leads Lena onto the crowded dance floor.
13Lena slips out of Ben's arms and leaves him standing alone among the dancers.
14Ben asks for the ring, and Kit shows empty hands and claims he has lost it.
15Ben yanks open the drawer and finds the ring box among the forks.
16Cornered, Kit tells Ben that Lena has a train at 23:40.
17Ben opens the car boot and pulls back the blanket to find the suitcase.
18Ben locks the car and pockets the keys.
19Lena tips her handbag out onto the coats, searching for the car keys.
20Ada books Lena a taxi and shows her the phone.
21Lena drags at the locked boot of the car.
22Ben comes down the front steps holding up the car keys.
23The party guests crowd out onto the front steps to watch, Kit holding the champagne.
24Ben unlocks the boot and sets the suitcase on the pavement between them.
25Ben kneels on the pavement beside the suitcase and opens the ring box.
26A taxi pulls up at the kerb behind Lena.
27The taxi driver loads Lena's suitcase into the taxi.
28Lena closes Ben's fingers over the open ring box.
29Lena gets into the taxi and pulls the door shut.
30The taxi is gone, and Ben stands alone at the empty kerb with the ring box.
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Ben tucks a small ring box into his suit jacket.
the picture turned out to be: A man is standing in a room. He is wearing a black suit. The man is holding a red object in his hands. There is a lamp behind the man.
looked at: o, s
scene 2 · medium
Lena hides a packed suitcase under a blanket in the car boot.
the picture turned out to be: A woman in a brown coat is standing next to a black car. There is a brown suitcase in front of the woman.
looked at: b, w, b
never shown — the story from here when it stopped
3. Kit opens the door and pulls Ben and Lena into the party.
4. Ben shows Kit the ring, and Kit sets champagne on ice for midnight.
5. Lena, alone, takes a night-train ticket from her coat pocket.
6. Ada steps out and takes the ticket from Lena's hand to read it.
7. Ada tells Kit, and Kit lifts the champagne back out of the ice.
8. Kit persuades Ben to hand over the ring box for safekeeping.
9. Kit drops the ring box into the cutlery drawer.
10. Lena pulls her coat out from the pile of guests' coats on the bed.
11. Ben catches Lena at the front door and lifts the coat off her shoulders.
12. Ben leads Lena onto the crowded dance floor.
13. Lena slips out of Ben's arms and leaves him standing alone among the dancers.
14. Ben asks for the ring, and Kit shows empty hands and claims he has lost it.
15. Ben yanks open the drawer and finds the ring box among the forks.
16. Cornered, Kit tells Ben that Lena has a train at 23:40.
17. Ben opens the car boot and pulls back the blanket to find the suitcase.
18. Ben locks the car and pockets the keys.
19. Lena tips her handbag out onto the coats, searching for the car keys.
20. Ada books Lena a taxi and shows her the phone.
21. Lena drags at the locked boot of the car.
22. Ben comes down the front steps holding up the car keys.
23. The party guests crowd out onto the front steps to watch, Kit holding the champagne.
24. Ben unlocks the boot and sets the suitcase on the pavement between them.
25. Ben kneels on the pavement beside the suitcase and opens the ring box.
26. A taxi pulls up at the kerb behind Lena.
27. The taxi driver loads Lena's suitcase into the taxi.
28. Lena closes Ben's fingers over the open ring box.
29. Lena gets into the taxi and pulls the door shut.
30. The taxi is gone, and Ben stands alone at the empty kerb with the ring box.
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